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new concept as it allows the opportunity to catch and address misconceptions in
            the moment (Riches, 2019). Once modeling is finished, the teacher and students
            should practice together by completing a graphic organizer as a group, with the
            teacher guiding and prompting students with their ideas to ensure they complete it
            correctly. Finally, the students can choose their own topics and fill out an organizer
            independently. At this stage, the teacher should check student work and provide
            feedback before the students begin to write their own individual essays. Before fully
            releasing students to complete their work, the teacher can also model how to use the
            organizer during the writing process and how to follow it exactly when drafting. This
            is beneficial if students practice “stream of consciousness” writing, where they write
            whatever comes to mind and change from topic to topic. This practice of adhering
            directly to the pre-planned organizer can help to prevent deviation when students are
            writing on their own.

            Color Coding
               Another  easily  implemented  organizational  strategy  is  Aumen’s  Step-Up-to-
            Writing  (2015)  color-coding  strategy.  With  this  strategy,  students  are  taught  to
            color code their topic sentence in green to mean “go” and decide what they will
            share; their reasons or facts in yellow meaning to “slow down” and explain the key
            concepts; their details in red to mean “stop” and present evidence with explanation
            and examples; and then their conclusion in green again to mean “go back to your
            topic.” This process allows students to visualize the way the paragraph is organized
            through color, and once they have finished drafting, they can return to what they
            have written and highlight with the appropriate colors to make sure they followed
            their plan accordingly (Auman, 2015).
               Again, a quick adaptation of the strategy allows students to modify the color-
            coding strategy to edit their work, helping them to remember the integral parts of
            an informational essay as shown on their graphic organizer. As shown in Figure 1,
            the hook and closing statement were pink, the topic sentence was green, the three
            facts were yellow, and the two examples for each fact were orange. This color-
            part association allows students to go back into their essays and highlight with the
            corresponding colors to check to make sure each piece has been included. It provides
            students with a way to edit that is more visual, which is beneficial when working
            with a population of special education students.
               Students should first learn to color code their writing using anchor papers of
            previous student work or teacher-generated work. The use of anchor papers allows
            students to “gauge an appropriate level of expectations or quality” (Culham, 2010,
            p. 7) and model good writing much like a mentor text. Students practice identifying
            and highlighting the key pieces of an essay through the anchor papers and analyze
            if any pieces from the graphic organizer are missing. Students are then prompted
            to give suggestions or “feedback” about the missing pieces and what they believe
            needs to be added to include each key piece. From that practice, students should be
            able to apply the process to their own writing.
               It is important that students are provided with a color-coded graphic organizer
            (Figure 1). Using the organizer, students can identify the corresponding colors and
            what they planned on writing and then cross reference the plan with their draft.
            Students should then highlight their work if it matches and leave it blank if it does
            not. If students have a missing element indicated by a blank section, they know they
            need to edit that area as it does not match their organizer.


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